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i wrote it about those who go unnoticed and without while the rest of us keep livin and ignore the lost and broken in the world thinkin our lives are too important....
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everyday i wonder where the broken souls go when its over
where do they find their comfort in this world, this world of broken hope

and theres so many hopeless souls, u dont even notice as u pass by,
your eyes are colorblind at their site, they'll go unnoticed again

dont let the sun go down on you

i know u can make it thru
wonder if u'll ever see the brokeness all around
everything u ever thought was it a lie
have u ever thought everything that u believed
was nothing to, nothing to u and me
theres so much if u just open your eyes
and give a little more
just give a little more

everyday u walk on livin like its something of a dream,. its not reality when u cant see, everywhere theres need
and in your make believe you'll see nothing still comes cheap as u break down ( you lost your crown)
your own life has brought u your demise (now u know what its like)
you'll go unnoticed again
now u know what its like
to be like them, unnoticed


wonder i u ever see the brokenness all around
everything u ever thought was it a lie
have u ever thought that everything that u believe
was nothing more than fantasy your livin in your make believe

have u ever took the time to see the world thru their eyes
everything u ever dreamed all becomes a big lie
nothing to keep wishing for u just want to die
come on out from make believe and you'll see those UNNOTICED
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Uploaded: Oct 19, 2008 - 02:48:15 AM
Last Updated: Oct 19, 2008 - 03:03:11 AM Last Played: May 02, 2019 - 11:47:13 PM
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lengold said 4016 days ago (October 19th, 2008)
Fantastic song
This could definitely be a hit - great song that builds and builds. Everything top notch. Love it.
Downloaded. Thanks.

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said 4015 days ago (October 19th, 2008)
Serious stuff.
A little Vedderish, maybe Staind. Nice build, guitars sound great. Might do without the "rap." I dunno. The ending could be tightened up a bit. I agree with Len. This has "hit" written all over it. Very nice.
Morning Light said 4015 days ago (October 19th, 2008)
Excellent song!
I really like how you use your voice, it sounds great, and wow, the rap too! Great Lyrics and the guitar sounds really cool!
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Feter said 4015 days ago (October 19th, 2008)
this is powerful..very nice recording my friend ..good
vocal very much alt/rockin one ..yes I do dig your
guitars work ...nice song ..thnx alot for sharin !!!
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MarkHolbrook said 4014 days ago (October 20th, 2008)
Excellent song
With a killer message.

Very nicely done!
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Ethos_Phree said 4014 days ago (October 20th, 2008)
i noticed
very strong vocals but something seems off about the rap...the song rocked and it had a lot of feeling and emotion to it...nice!
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Location: Burnie Tasmania australia
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I've been writing and playing since 17 when i wrote my first song called love gone wrong and since then my songs have told my story. hope you enjoy. ... [see more]

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