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Mechanical Delight


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DeputyDoofy

 Genre: Industrial

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Another industrial tune...
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Uploaded: Nov 19, 2004 - 08:41:05 AM
Last Updated: Sep 17, 2005 - 09:13:24 AM Last Played: May 27, 2019 - 08:08:37 AM
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chikoppi said 5357 days ago (November 19th, 2004)
Industrial-ambient
There are some good vibes in this piece, but I think it sort of lacks a central character or intent. The individual components have a compatible industrial flavor and the mix is balanced. It just didn't connect for me in an emotional sense. Maybe shorter with stronger gestures? Maybe add some synths for background texture and chord movement? (6-6-6-6)
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DeputyDoofy said 5357 days ago (November 19th, 2004)
Industrial-ambient
Thanks for your response. I appreciate constructive feedback. I don't know if I'll ever get around to making the fixes/changes to this specific tune, but your comments do not fall on deaf ears. It's something to consider for future tunes. I'm forever learning. :D Thanks for listening!!---
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said 5357 days ago (November 19th, 2004)
Relentless
Cool sounds.

The opening/closing section drums are too loopy, too
quantized. After a minute or so they set my teeth on
edge.

The 3rd section needs to be more different than the 1st.

As a groove for a chase scene in a movie or videogame it
works (but would be much shorter), but it doesn't really
make a stand alone musical
statement.
_nderscore said 5357 days ago (November 19th, 2004)
well-structured
lots of changeups & redirections. some really great
sounds/compositions. has sort of a dancy/happy feel. i
really like it, but in the name of criticism, i would say it
does get a little repetitious at times. i think if you went
back in & started messing it up where things noticeably
repeat, you would generate another level of intricacy &
interest. 'nice song' :D
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packosmokes said 5357 days ago (November 19th, 2004)
It's a brilliant bed
I like the mood you've created and it's got tha stompy
industrial beat!

I'd puch for more variation and possibly the addition of
musical element or two. The thing about industrial
instrumentals is they somehow need to keep your
attention without changing too much.

I'd recommend listening to some stuff by VNV Nation,
they're a little poppier, but they're very good at keeping
instrumentals "alive" so that they don't feel too repetitive.

However, it's got a great hook and overall I enjoy your
track!
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said 5357 days ago (November 19th, 2004)
Game-ability
Doofmeister... you have set the stage for a video game
here. Cool audio treatments. Just enough variety to keep
interest. I can picture the players... can you?

7-7-7-7
MissChaos said 5357 days ago (November 19th, 2004)
Hey, not bad at all!
I think you've done a wonderful job creating voices with
synth instruments - almost goulish sounding. Perfect
compliment for such a dark song. I like the way the
sounds weave into each other. You've done a nice job with
the production. I'd like to hear a bit more dynamics in
this. Nice job! Oh, and what the heck is the song art? I
can't make out the words... where are my glasses?!

Miss Chaos
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TobinMueller said 5354 days ago (November 22nd, 2004)
Funky transformations
Great journey thru electronica transformations. Some very
hip moments. this really drove for me. Loved the funky
synths. Nice track.
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DeputyDoofy said 5354 days ago (November 22nd, 2004)
Thanks!
Everyone, thanks for the feedback (both the nice ones and the critiquing ones). Every bit helps! :D
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Industrial music is a loose term for a number of different styles of electronic and experimental music. First used in the mid 1970s to describe the then-unique sound of Industrial Records artists, a wide variety of artists and labels have since come

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