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Your Arms


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dadgarus

 Genre: Ballad

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This is Dadgar's 2nd song on MacJams.
Hope all lovers like it!
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Lyrics
I need your arms to hold me tight
I wanna make love to you tonight
This love is what I found in you
And I believe that it is true

So lay beside me
before I'm gone
Hold my hands until the down
For I need to see the passion in your eyes
I hear my heart say this love will never die

I really need to watch your face
So save me from this empty space
between our nights, between our hearts
Whithin the dreams we try to hide

So lay beside me
before I'm gone
Hold my hands until the down
For I need to see the passion in your eyes
I hear my heart say this love will never die

It makes me blue
it makes me cry
it makes me sad
it makes me die
when you say the word "goodbye"

So lay beside me
before I'm gone
Hold my hands until the down
For I need to see the passion in your eyes
I hear my heart say this love will never die
Song Stats
Hits: 2187
Comments: 10
Fans: 2
Plays: 66
Downloads: 95
Votes: 2
Uploaded: Feb 15, 2009 - 05:30:06 PM
Last Updated: Feb 15, 2009 - 05:30:06 PM Last Played: May 17, 2019 - 06:33:35 AM
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Hardware:
Electric guita, PC, Creative soundblaster audigy 2 ZS, Behringer Midi controller with keyboard.
Software:
Cakewalk Sonar 7
Comments
Warren Smith said 3774 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
Rocking

Welcome to MacJams - it's great to see folks are rockin' in Iran.

Your initial two posts show you can do it all - sing, play and write nicely structured songs. There's a wonderful balance between the expressive voice and distinct instrumentation that creates a dynamic unity.

My only feedback would echo what Drak said in his post on your previous song ... that the ending is a bit abrupt ... that it doesn't bring this love ballad to a satisfying closure ... but please take this is a really minor comment.

All in all - two great posts. Keep on rocking!


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VicDiesel said 3774 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
Pretty
Nice song.

The low frequencies are a bit indistinct. What did you use for the bass? It doesn't have a very clear attack.

Good guitar solo.


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Willywagga said 3774 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
Great work
Nice sentiments, good production, you have a very good voice.
Really liked it, thanks for sharing.
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dadgarus said 3774 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
Thanks a lot
Thank you for your comments.
Check out my latest song called Bi Khodahafezi (Dedicated to F.S.S.)
maxjsl37 said 3774 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
Nice
Really tight, Good vocals. Nice song.
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elfdaughter said 3774 days ago (February 15th, 2009)
Strong emotions
Very strong emotions coming through there. Excellent playing and good work on the lyrics too. You've got the sort of voice I could listen to all day - such warmth to it!
Check out my latest song called The Kynges Ballade
VicDiesel said 3773 days ago (February 16th, 2009)
PS
your writing and singing style reminds me a lot of Feter :-)


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caroline said 3771 days ago (February 18th, 2009)
lovely
i enjoyed this one too - thank you x
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SJB said 3769 days ago (February 20th, 2009)
excellent
I like this a lot. You've got a great voice and the mix of instruments builds nicely. The electric lead is perfect for this and steps up the power at just the right time.
I'm looking forward to hearing more of you songs.
best wishes
Steve

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dadgarus said 3768 days ago (February 21st, 2009)
Thank you
Thank you all for your comments.
Check out my latest song called Bi Khodahafezi (Dedicated to F.S.S.)
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Name: Dadgar Mohajer
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Genre Info
A ballad is a story in a song, usually a narrative song or poem. It is a rhythmic saga of a past affair, which may be heroic, romantic or satirical, political (affected by the previous three types mentioned, refers to either glorifying the exploits o

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