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Warmth of Stone


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Rayelise

 Genre: Ballad
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a sad song.... first draft...
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Lyrics
brothers gone, i don't know why
left so quick couldn't say goodbye
now the sea swept him away
left no trace of the tenderness he gave

lovers gone, he stopped in my dream
to say he wouldn't be coming for me
in hunger i jailed him in my mind
a tease for connection i can't
find....
me
in
words unspoken.
touch
the
one
whose touch got broken.

brothers gone, he sent a letter
saying i should have known him better
am i blind with need
or does this sight make things too deep for them

lovers gone, he tore off my page
fade me out so i can be upstaged
by the ones in sun who are alive
basking in a welcome i can't
find...
me
in
words unspoken.
touch
the
one
whose touch got broken.


I don't mind the sea alone, it's where I go
giving all to my true friend, which is my soul
I don't mind this world alone, it's all I've known
I just thought there could be one to warm this stone
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Uploaded: Feb 22, 2009 - 05:13:11 AM
Last Updated: Apr 12, 2014 - 09:58:20 AM Last Played: Jul 04, 2019 - 03:34:20 AM
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Feter said 3831 days ago (February 22nd, 2009)
Warmth of Stone
I think you are one of the honest singers around MJ
I ever heard ..incredible lyrics ...I wish I can go
back write such poems again ...loved the piano ..really
fit this style ...awesome ballad ..thank you do very
much for sharing !!!!
Check out my latest song called Roll with it
Rayelise said 3826 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
you're welcome!
Thank you Feter. Honesty is the most important thing to me in song-writing, so I am glad it is appreciated.
Check out my latest song called Angel of Montgomery
Estella said 3826 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
Rachel
You inspire me to write more!

This was very moving to listen to. Very beautiful.
Check out my latest song called Insomnia
Rayelise said 3826 days ago (February 27th, 2009)
Estella
Thank you. I am glad to inspire you to write more!! You inspire me as well.
Check out my latest song called Angel of Montgomery
billullo said 3826 days ago (February 26th, 2009)
Touching
This was one of those really genuine performances that I love to hear. Thanks for sharing it. You're voice has a great quality to it - don't be afraid to belt it out, girl! Great work. :)
Check out my latest song called Vessel
Eli_Wise said 3621 days ago (September 19th, 2009)
lyrics
i love these lyrics rachel. they create a great story.
Check out my latest song called Lost in an Open World
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Name: Rachel Elise
Location: Baltimore MD United States
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A ballad is a story in a song, usually a narrative song or poem. It is a rhythmic saga of a past affair, which may be heroic, romantic or satirical, political (affected by the previous three types mentioned, refers to either glorifying the exploits o

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