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You Broke Your Promise - Intimate Confessions


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JayLCiazz

 Genre: Acoustic

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A conversation with a friend from the past Mr. J. Daniels.
From the upcoming album "Intimate Confessions"

For those who are kinda confused by the lyrics.. It's not Jack who has to be sorry..but the person who added Jack as his friend! As many alcoholics say their misery is the fault of others and absolutely not their own....well.... it ain't true!

This is a loopversion and a non loopversion is in the making... I keep you posted!

You Broke Your Promise
written by JayLCiazz©2009
o0o™ Records.
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You Broke Your Promise
written by JayLCiazz©2009
o0o™ Records.

You told me
Ya wouldn't lie to me no more
you broke your promise

You told me
Ya wouldn't spy on me no more
you broke your promise

Take it all
Don't be sorry
For taking it all

Fake it all
Don't be sorry
For faking it all

You told me
Ya wouldn't try to be on my track
You broke your promise

You told me
ya wouldn't mind to be off of my back
You broke your promise

Take it all
Don't be sorry
For taking it all

Fake it all
Don't be sorry
For faking it all

jealousy and angre
misunderstanding
endless discussions
never ending stories

Thank you mister Daniels
You broke your promise!

Fake it all
Don't be sorry
For faking it all (promise)

Don't be sorry x (promise)

Don't be sorry 2x
Take it all
Don't be sorry
For taking it all

You told me
Ya wouldn't lie to me no more
you broke your promise

You told me
Ya wouldn't spy on me no more
you broke your promise
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Plays: 45
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Uploaded: Aug 31, 2009 - 07:28:05 PM
Last Updated: Aug 31, 2009 - 07:37:31 PM Last Played: Mar 21, 2017 - 11:55:40 PM
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Feter said 3217 days ago (August 31st, 2009)
You Broke Your Promise
this is cool ...wonderful vocal work the ballad
like folk and lyrics just fantastic ..the harmony
work here is absolutely stunning ..best kind ..
thnx alot for sharin !!!!
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JayLCiazz said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
You're welcome
I'm happy you could enjoy it so much.. I take your compliment kindly.
It's like pieces fall together creating this collection of acoustic songs. p.s. I keep saying Peter when I see your name, hahaha.. Feter is kinda strange to me..but I guess I get use to it.
Check out my latest song called One Day
mybravedesign said 3217 days ago (August 31st, 2009)
...
you def. have your own style here and the other track i heard... like it a lot... it would be awesome with some tight drums and bass backing.... almost r&b but still your own.....
Check out my latest song called good day (to go out tonight) demo 2.0
JayLCiazz said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Nice of you
to say that! I appreciate your listen and that you liked, left a comment and even suggest additions... in my mind I can hear additions too..but in this case I want to keep it two instruments only. The whole album will be having this theme.. Just me and the guitar or piano..but the last instrument i'm not yet sure.. Let us experiment and find out.. thanks a lot for your visit!
Check out my latest song called One Day
crissew said 3217 days ago (August 31st, 2009)
Another J Ciazz Classic
Great tune. Love it. Well done
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JayLCiazz said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Crissew..thanks
I'm happy I met you.....Let's collab on some more classics.. oh.. hell...we are already doing that... ;)
Check out my latest song called One Day
Char said 3217 days ago (August 31st, 2009)
Creative.
I hear a bit Of Jim Croce, here. Very nice listen. (I hope I don't have to do penance for the comparison to Croce, but he had been a favorite of mine and missed him.)
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JayLCiazz said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Had to check him out
on youtube and I'm happy I did.. love his voice.. (listened only to "operator" yet). I don't mind at all to be compared.. as a matter of fact I feel honored... being compared is a compliment.. and thanks for that.
Sorry you miss him.. and I can't replace him but I'm happy this song made you remember him again :)
Check out my latest song called One Day
drakonis said 3216 days ago (August 31st, 2009)
crystal clear
although the looped guitar is slightly distracting after a bit... it doesn't matter much, because your nice singing voice, and great melody/harmony, and crisp words really make this shine. Well done.
ttfn,
Drakonis
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JayLCiazz said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
I agree..
on the loop.. and I'm working on a loopfree version.. I'm happy you like my voice and harmonies.. and that they made you forget about the repeating loop! Keep you posted on updates if you want :)
Check out my latest song called One Day
carlajpatterson said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Love the conversational tone
Another song in your intimate confessions series which is so well-written and sung, beautifully produced and layered in the harmonies. I love this one, too.
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JayLCiazz said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Hugs!
Dear, I'm happy to see you are on macjams too.. you'll love it here! I'm happy to be your friend too....your words are kind and honest..as you are! Thanks for expressing your thoughts here.. Hugs and Kisses
Check out my latest song called One Day
lengold said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Thought I recognised
that voice - so great to see you back, under any name.
Wonderful.
Cheers
Len

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JayLCiazz said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Hi lengold
Great to see you are still here.. :) good to know you recognized my voice.. but not only my name is different also is my music...I have to express how loyal you've been all these times....it touches my heart!
Glad to be back..
Check out my latest song called One Day
ShadowofNine said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Djev
The first time I heard this I was blown away, and I still am Bro, masterful work...
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JayLCiazz said 3216 days ago (September 1st, 2009)
Of course...
you heard this on iComp.. lol.. You're on Macjams too.. so confusing at times hahaha... I'm taken your compliment with a smile on my face...and nice to see you here... I'll be over on your site soon...
Check out my latest song called One Day
ste said 3215 days ago (September 2nd, 2009)
love
the production of this. so clear ! great tune too
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johnwhitehead said 3215 days ago (September 2nd, 2009)
You told me
Love your singing, harmonies, vocal arrangement.
Look forward to non-loop version, although this one works just fine.
Check out my latest song called Wandering Blues
sschedra said 3215 days ago (September 2nd, 2009)
Another intense song
This one gets to the root of it. How often we will blame everything and everyone instead of just taking charge of our problems. Even in cases of abuse, we let the fact that it was done to us, rob us of the freedom we have to move beyond being a victim. Again, we believe the lie and won't take an active role in the truth. Very deep perspective on life in this song.
Thanks man,
Stephen
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bud said 3213 days ago (September 3rd, 2009)
This project you're on is very interesting
I really like what I've heard so far and as simple as the arrangements are there's a very big stage that you seem to be playing on - almost operatic in a way. Very intense. Great work.
Check out my latest song called drone4xok
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