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Once more


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dadgarus

 Genre: Rock
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Lyrics
Can't walk
it's too cold
my feet are almost frozen
Can't sleep
in the snow
I see you door ain't open

I try
to ask your help
You don't care that I'm calling
I say
I need your hand
You don't know that I'm falling

Once more
open the door
let me step inside
Once more
open the door
there's nothing but the night

I feel
I'm gonna die
right next to your door
You are
the one who's got
my life and death in hands

I beg
you on my knees
Don't let my body freez
Give me
just one more try
I beg you for a chance

Once more
open the door
let me step inside
Once more
open the door
there's nothing but the night
Song Stats
Hits: 2484
Comments: 10
Fans: 7
Plays: 68
Downloads: 89
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Oct 12, 2009 - 10:02:25 AM
Last Updated: Oct 12, 2009 - 10:02:25 AM Last Played: Jun 13, 2019 - 07:10:49 AM
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Comments
sheilad said 3564 days ago (October 12th, 2009)
a great
tune here! Nice lyrics and great vocals
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Char said 3564 days ago (October 12th, 2009)
Oh,
really nice job on music and lyrics and vocals. Enjoyed it. Way to go, kid. Thanks.
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drakonis said 3563 days ago (October 12th, 2009)
Nice rocker...
This is a cool rocker that weaves between metal and darkwave and electronica... interesting. As always, nicely written, arranged, and sung, Dadgar! This almost feels like there should be a loud guitar break in the middle, or a much softer electronic break in the middle (with ethereal female singing) to break up the even-ness of this, but that's the only thing I could think of, and it is a little suggestion... really this is good as-is.
ttfn,
Drakonis
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magnatone said 3563 days ago (October 12th, 2009)
Once More
Hi Dad! great to have a new upload from you! you're very talented with your lyrics/vocals and general musicianship - much enjoyed - thanks!
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Outtaorbit said 3561 days ago (October 15th, 2009)
your tunes are so ......
Nicely done....
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Gaylen75 said 3561 days ago (October 15th, 2009)
Nice
Straight rock and very great tone. Love the keys.
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awigze said 3560 days ago (October 15th, 2009)
Dagarus
Ya- know the feeling... glad those days are over for me... you captured the anguish really well in your vocals... in the snow- ya- I like that... good tune and well constructed with the breaks in the middle.
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Calchas said 3520 days ago (November 24th, 2009)
You're
getting better and better. Your arrangements are wonderful. Vocals and electric guitar work are aces!

Be well friend!
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maxruehl said 3518 days ago (November 26th, 2009)
Hey!
You've got another winner here, D! Great energy and performance. Terrific job.:)
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TobinMueller said 3428 days ago (February 25th, 2010)
Nice song for a snowy winter
Nice track. Really dug the clean straight-ahead feel. I like it when you sing this sort of song, it fits you voice well. Thought that half way through, when it cools out and then rebuilds, at some point it could've used a guitar solo or something; not enough happens to warrant the long instrumental, in my ears. But I liked the track. Thanks for sharing this.
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