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This is weird song, as in style anyway...
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Forgiveness

Should I forgive you
for all the pain and sorrow
that you have put me through
Still I don't know
if you were lying or telling the truth
With your smiling faces and that happiness
could I erase it, make it not exist
Would I stop from crying
If I could forgive
you

Should I forgive you
for all the pain and sorrow
that you have put me through
Still I don't know
if you were lying or telling the truth
When you said you'd love me for all time
With all your cliches and bottles of wine
Was it a mistake, or was it a lie?
I saw him hold you and I began to die
die...
And I Began to die
Die inside


Should I forgive you...
Should I forgive you...


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Votes: 2
Uploaded: Jan 09, 2010 - 05:16:49 PM
Last Updated: Jan 09, 2010 - 05:16:49 PM Last Played: May 26, 2019 - 02:47:19 AM
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Feter said 3447 days ago (January 9th, 2010)
Forgiveness
Just love your production as always ...crystal
clear ..(me think) you would put hint with any
instrument you choose to let the band all give
the blast the second one at 2:30 was fine though
good vocal work ...nice ending ...kudos ..thnx
alot for sharin !!!!
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jibes said 3446 days ago (January 10th, 2010)
Not weird at all
A very pleasant and beautiful song. Good job!
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spitlogic said 3446 days ago (January 10th, 2010)
Excellent
Powerful track and well thought lyrics. Love it.
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davidmurphy1899 said 3442 days ago (January 15th, 2010)
ballad
this is a fine song. the line ''and i began to die'' is very powerfull and''could i erase it make it not exist'' is equelly strong.the production is superb will check out the rest of your work david
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