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2010-05-22
The melody came to my mind suddenly during the night. I quickly recorded it. Three days later added FX sounds.

This is my first submission to MacJams. Please comment and suggest improvements or describe some evident errors. I am a newbie.
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Uploaded: Jun 01, 2010 - 09:33:15 AM
Last Updated: Jul 16, 2010 - 02:39:38 AM Last Played: Jul 08, 2019 - 07:33:58 PM
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Casio keyboards
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Garageband
Comments
alackbass said 3400 days ago (June 1st, 2010)
Nice Melody
I love the melody. Tasteful use of sound effects. Excellent groove. Nice choice of tones and sounds. There's some nice counterpoint taking place here. This is an ideal vehicle for a vocal.
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ooppym said 3388 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
Is there a way to find someone
with good vocal to collab on this?
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breezer said 3400 days ago (June 1st, 2010)
cool
Nice job! Welcome to macJams
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ooppym said 3388 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
thanks
I am glad you liked it.
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dave_b said 3400 days ago (June 1st, 2010)
Short night stop
Nice chord progression. Good complementary sound choices and production You could turn this into an R&B flavored hip-hop song.
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ooppym said 3388 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
Chord progression
That is some night mood progression :-) I like it myself thou it might be primitive concerning music theory. Still. I like it.

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awigze said 3399 days ago (June 1st, 2010)
counter bass
I like that alot where the bass line takes on the melody. Love those late night inspirations. cool tune. This could really be expanded into a very profound tune. It has the mood for it.
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ooppym said 3388 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
I dream of learning the music
so that I can do more.
I agree about the mood. It has it.
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guygrooves said 3398 days ago (June 2nd, 2010)
Wow...
I had a friend who used to write lyrics in the same way as this song came about. I wish I could introduce the two of you. I know you asked for direction. I just don't hear anything that could be said in that vein. Welcome to MJ and we'll be looking for more from you.
Peace
Guy
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ooppym said 3388 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
thanks for wow
:-) I honestly think I do not deserve Wows. But thanks a lot for kind words.
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parallel_eighty_eight said 3397 days ago (June 4th, 2010)
CRICKETS
CANNOT GET BETTER
WHAT ERRORS
AND TOO THE CRICKETS
AND A DOOR SLAM
MAYBE LONGER TOO
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ooppym said 3388 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
ALL CAPS
When I composed it and listened to it was ALL CAPS myself. Thanks for sharing your feelings.
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Char said 3390 days ago (June 11th, 2010)
Lonely
A lonely walk through the city after a rain with no destination in mind. Please make a longer piece. :)
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ooppym said 3388 days ago (June 13th, 2010)
with your description in mind
I really want to make it a longer piece. I should only wait till the Moment comes.
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MarkHolbrook said 3390 days ago (June 11th, 2010)
Cool...
Love how you are taking melodies you hear in your head and turning them into cool music!
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Kicbal said 3377 days ago (June 23rd, 2010)
Good Stuff
There is a nice easy bounce to this and the melody floats on top of the drum pattern well. Simple perhaps, but compelling and engaging, so simple is sometimes the best approach. Nice first post and welcome to MacJams.
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Henke said 3251 days ago (October 28th, 2010)
Pretty nice one
I like the melody you've got going here. Cool with the crickets(?) too. I tink I might have used them on one of my posts too (Villain Theme). Glad I found you here, a late welcome to MJ :-)

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