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This song was originally written by Lennon714 and was graciously offered as an open collaboration. You can still find the source here.

Bones - Rough Mix

I thought it had brilliant potential and wanted to give it a try. With some rearrangement, added instruments, some backing vocals, and remixing this is what I came up with.

I'm not quite done with it and would love to hear feedback as to what you think should stay/go, what could be better or otherwise beneficial to the track as a whole. I do plan to add some other verse lyrics if I have some time in the future, I also plan on adding a different outro of sorts. etc...
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Plays: 368
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Uploaded: Aug 24, 2010 - 04:43:06 PM
Last Updated: Aug 24, 2010 - 04:43:06 PM Last Played: Apr 25, 2019 - 03:12:15 AM
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alackbass said 3229 days ago (August 24th, 2010)
Bones by Lennon714
Oh yeah man! I'll add that one to my iPod. Has a late 90's pop rock quality, Vertical Horizon type of thing. Way cool!
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kickliquid said 3229 days ago (August 24th, 2010)
The 90s
was a good decade.
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ted23 said 3229 days ago (August 24th, 2010)
You do
have that much talent!
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This is excellent. The vocals are top and the heavy thick guitars are fantastic. Nice collab!
kickliquid said 3229 days ago (August 24th, 2010)
The Talent
was all Lennon714 :)
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867-5309 said 3228 days ago (August 24th, 2010)
right
this is just so fabulous !
vocals too -
as it makes you feel so alive just hearing it.
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AndeeScott said 3228 days ago (August 24th, 2010)
Nice
Was nodding my head to this all the way through :)
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kickliquid said 3228 days ago (August 25th, 2010)
I did
the exact thing when I heard the original
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papag said 3228 days ago (August 24th, 2010)
Say no more
Just so tasty! Fav'd and Dl'd
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kickliquid said 3228 days ago (August 25th, 2010)
nice
*high five*
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fasteddie said 3228 days ago (August 24th, 2010)
Cool
No... Way cool!

Holy feedback guitar batman at the end... I like that too.

Way to go!
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kickliquid said 3228 days ago (August 25th, 2010)
That guitar..
..was all Lennon714, that was actually one of the things I didn't do anything to it except bring the levels up.
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ste said 3228 days ago (August 25th, 2010)
very
nice. like the mix. that guitar is excellent, as are the harms. good rendition of an excellent tune
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Symphony101 said 3228 days ago (August 25th, 2010)
Killer !
Man this is great, I can't really find something wrong, I really loved it.
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lavalamp said 3228 days ago (August 25th, 2010)
Ahhhh
Great job. You did this great justice. Weezer vibe.

LL
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CIASM_ZENABI_ said 3228 days ago (August 25th, 2010)
bones
very nice feel to this tune. great vocals and harmonies. guitar tones are great. chorus drives great. arrangement is really well done. clean guitar tones are really cool. chorus feels very anthemic to me. excellent post. enjoyed it a lot. cheers
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Lennon714 said 3226 days ago (August 26th, 2010)
Bones
I forgot that I left in the verse ideas I was working with. I was not satisfied with them at all, but you made them sound good! The guitar additions are very, very nice. The only mix crit I have is I'd like more bottom end to round it out. But this is starting to sound killer. Great job!
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magnatone said 3226 days ago (August 27th, 2010)
Bones
a very good take on a cool song!
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sschedra said 3225 days ago (August 27th, 2010)
I like it,
I think you did a terrific job. I am not sure what to suggest. The drums might need something more in the kick maybe? The snare sounds more like a high hat.
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davezero said 3204 days ago (September 18th, 2010)
loud and proud
pretty tight production, nice back ups, yeah, outro work can be a fun place to tinker, kick ass tune
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