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Ok a song i wrote about the state of the world and feelin we may need some kind of spiritual help and guidance.... any1 wanna do a bass line let me know.... still workin on vox but hey this is it so far.. as usual any advice or feedback would be great :)
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World i know

v1
if i wish upon a star will it get me very far
when all i can seem to do is get further from you

if i lay down all my pride, bear the shame that i denied
see the colours so unique, something more inside of me

and i never chose this life that was given, what a lie
somethings always pulling me to the dark surrounding me
can you take me by the hand somehow make me whole again
i just wanna be your friend, i dont want to leave again

ch

will someone pull me through

i'm dyin in the world i know
can someone heal these wounds

v2

if i'm stayin up alone, pleae don't call me on the phone
i just need some time to think with these fears inside of me

ever known a pain devine hurts so much it robs your life
peace it comes only in sleep, god please keep me in this dream

i've been chasing all along wasted dreams, i've been so wrong
once believed there's something more, now i believe in this world

that's so fallen in the shades, shades of grey to hide their shame
morals thrown into the cold, darkness floods into your souls

ch and end
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Uploaded: Nov 11, 2010 - 07:01:26 PM
Last Updated: Nov 11, 2010 - 07:19:17 PM Last Played: Jan 11, 2019 - 06:58:49 PM
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ramonaji said 3138 days ago (November 11th, 2010)
I really like this
the vocals have a lot of tangible passion, and the overall song is very enjoyable. Bass line will complete it!
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nevermine said 3137 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
wow
thanks, i google tangible passion and it is exactly what i was hoping people would feel from my songs, more than just a listening experience but feeling the words and music inside them.... so glad it is doing what i hoped cos music is my life and want others to feel what i do from it
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RAVENS said 3138 days ago (November 11th, 2010)
Coolness
The opening reminds me of Whitesnake, very cool. Great song, and your vocals are full of emotion which I dig. When are you going to sing a happy song Mr.?

RAVEN ;-)
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nevermine said 3137 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
whitesnake
wow i remember them :) glad u liked the song miss.. and btw happy whats that lol... nah maybe one day once i air out my dirty washing lol
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lavalamp said 3138 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
VOX
You've got such a cool rock voice, man. You're also an excellent writer. Seems you've been posting a lot lately. Keep 'em coming, but you ought to wait about 3 days between to give everyone a chance to hear them.

Yes, this needs bass, but you already know that mate.

LL
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nevermine said 3137 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
ty so many times
yOU ARE SUCH A BIG INSPIRATION TO ME AND ONE OF THE FEW REASONS I NEVEER GAVE UP ON MY MUSIC... oops caps lock is on lol..... will try to post a bit between tho, thanks LL :) just got a flood of songs coming out of me atm lol
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Loob said 3138 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
Shades of William Topley
I like it. You could use some drums, bass and guitar. I like this.
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nevermine said 3137 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
hey
looking forward to seeing your work on this :) lets finish the canvas and thanks again 4 your offer!!!!!!! always wanted to get involved more with others here!
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Morning Light said 3137 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
Wow!
You are a top knotch artist! This is amazing! Thanks for posting and sharing this!
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nevermine said 3137 days ago (November 12th, 2010)
thankyou :)
always love your inspiration to my music and encouragement... and i dont know if i deserve such praise but ty again :D
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lengold said 3134 days ago (November 16th, 2010)
Like this...
reminds me of one of those great songs you hear at the end of film. Cheers
Len

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