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Inner Peace (incomplete)



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A song in the works that makes me think of Angels & Airwaves (the soundscape of filtered guitar and synth) and Green Day (the harmony in the vocals), and The Offspring slightly.

Instrumental: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/16845185/Music/eScape.mp3

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Light from above
Glowing bright
Shining down
On my dreams
Chasing the night
Enjoying the sight
Life is never
What it seems
Stars in the sky
They hear every lie
So dont talk
Just lie down next to me
Living the dream
Remember every scene
I guess this
Is inner peace
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Uploaded: Dec 13, 2010 - 04:22:48 AM
Last Updated: Dec 15, 2010 - 06:14:41 AM Last Played: Apr 05, 2019 - 02:18:06 PM
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michael2 said 3172 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
that intro is outstanding. I could have listened to that for another 3 minutes. when you say incomplete are you meaning you want to make it longer (more parts) or you want to mix it slightly different? I would leave it the length it is with a way longer intro. just my opinion though.
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Aemyn said 3172 days ago (December 13th, 2010)
Yeah, I think I will expand the intro highly, adding length and subtle instruments.

Do you feel another verse+chorus would work?
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michael2 said 3172 days ago (December 14th, 2010)
sure you could do another verse or a change or whatever, but what's appealing about this to me is that it's more like an art piece than a typical rock tune, like something you'd hear on an album. i like how it does the intro and then you get the snippet of verse, and then it's gone. you could even do another fully developed verse/chorus/verse type version without the intro. kind of a 70's idea, but might be cool.
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