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El sueño se acabó


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rolf_ruiz

 Genre: Indie Rock

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I did this song 14 years ago. Today I decided to record it before it gets lost from my mind.
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Lyrics
Buscar un lugar, y en el pensar en tí.
Esperar que jamás te irás perdiendo sola.

Esperar sin hablar, el miedo se irá.
Soñar, y soñar, soñar en un lugar.

En el que el sueño no esté callado.
En el que el sueño no esté sangrado.
No quiero salir, no me dejes ir de aquí.
El sueño se acabó, se acabó.

/// Translation ///

Find a place, and think about you.
Hope to never see you getting lost.

Wait without speak, the fear will go away.
Dream and dream, dream in one place.

Where the dream is not silent.
Where the dream is not bleeding.
I do not want to leave, do not let me go away.
The dream is over, is over.
Song Stats
Hits: 1382
Comments: 6
Fans: 0
Plays: 54
Downloads: 43
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Sep 08, 2011 - 01:22:42 PM
Last Updated: Sep 08, 2011 - 03:59:36 PM Last Played: Oct 17, 2018 - 09:12:53 AM
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Hardware:
Bass: Jass Bass Fender
Guitar: Ibanez S-100
Guitar Processor: Roland RP21D
Mic: Shure SM58
Macbook Pro Mid2009
Software:
Garageband
Trackplug 5
Comments
rolf_ruiz said 2623 days ago (September 8th, 2011)
Updated
Added Lyrics with translation (need correction).
Check out my latest song called Project #6
CrazeeFlootGrrl said 2617 days ago (September 14th, 2011)
Mmm
I like the feel of it! :)
Check out my latest song called The Way
rolf_ruiz said 2617 days ago (September 14th, 2011)
; )
Thank you : )
Check out my latest song called Project #6
VicDiesel said 2616 days ago (September 15th, 2011)
Ahem
Good sounding arrangement, nice guitar playing, good groove.

But really, do you listen to your vocals? Between 0:30 and 0:35 there is not a single note that is in tune. In other places you're fine.

You could consider playing the vocal melody first on a keyboard and then try to sing along. That might increase your accuracy. Or invest in autotune or melodyne, just to push certain notes into place.
Check out my latest song called Low blow
rolf_ruiz said 2615 days ago (September 17th, 2011)
Very useful
Thank you. My vocals never had been my best, but I'll work on them. I'll take your advice. In the past I've tried GBs autotune built in, but without any good results (total dehumanized vocals). I'm going to give a shot with both (autotune and melodyne), along with keyboard guides.
Check out my latest song called Project #6
rolf_ruiz said 2614 days ago (September 17th, 2011)
: )
I really appreciate this kind of feedback. It's the one that makes me push things to get better.
Check out my latest song called Project #6
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Name: Rolf
Location: San Antonio Texas United States
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I was born in Mexico City in 1977. I had a band in my youth and I keep wonderful memories of it. Today I'm a game developer and live in San Antonio, Texas. When I have a chance I grab my guitar and shred some notes on it. ... [see more]

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