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Lazy River, Please Deliver Me


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This is a song about Deliverance. My timing is off (I can't even clap on time) and my voice is bad, but I had fun putting this together.
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It was supposed to be just a trip with the guys
A lazy river

Some fun in your lives to get away from the wives
For a weekend

You camped for the night and lit a fire so bright
No talk of sorrows

If only you knew what those strange men would do
Tomorrow

Another day has passed you by
You look at the moon painted in the sky
Tomorrow you won't feel the same
So full of misery and shame

The very next day things did not go your way
On the river shore

Two men emerged from the trees and made you drop to your knees
They wanted so much more

They had a shotgun so big one made you squeal like a pig
But they didn't shoot

And on the bright side, a fact that can't be denied
They really thought you were cute

They tied your friend with his belt, you both have never felt
Quite so shaken and sad

Those men were from the deep south, they liked your friend's pretty mouth
That's Angelina's dad

And it was too late for you, but Lewis sure did come through
His aim can't be beat

An arrow through your suitor's chest, now you can finally sit and rest
On a donut seat!
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Uploaded: Oct 29, 2011 - 08:27:05 PM
Last Updated: Oct 29, 2011 - 08:27:05 PM Last Played: Oct 17, 2018 - 04:24:29 AM
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sammydix said 2601 days ago (October 30th, 2011)
Deliver
i like the spacious sound you have on this song. cool use of that 50s progression along with the screenplay cum lyrics transition. *extremely* catchy song man.
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jfisenne said 2600 days ago (October 31st, 2011)
Thanks
for giving it a listen Sammy.
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carbon said 2600 days ago (October 31st, 2011)
jfisenne
your voice is bad? i'm going to go ahead and disagree with ya there. i think your voice is sweet... well as sweet as can be singing about the movie deliverance... what a funny song topic! the lyrics are great and the whole song is well executed. funny picture too... so full of misery and shame!
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jfisenne said 2600 days ago (October 31st, 2011)
Thanks
I was wondering if anyone would get the humor or even remember the movie Deliverance, but you did. Thanks for stopping by and commenting.
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PeterB7858 said 2599 days ago (November 2nd, 2011)
LOL...
LOL... If only you knew what those strange men would do to you tomorrow... I love this. I was chuckling all the way through. Clever, clever, clever. Enjoyed. Regards, Peter.
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jfisenne said 2596 days ago (November 4th, 2011)
Hey Peter
Thanks for checking it out and getting the joke.
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