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Rain Falling


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LukeJL

 Genre: Hard Rock
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I haven't written or recorded anything in a while. This is just the chorus, bridge, and ending because I'd really like to get some feedback on this, maybe some help and suggestions if possible. Here's the problem I'm running into which is discouraging me from finishing this or to continue recording...As much as I try to get this song to sound professional, like studio professional, I just can't. I've tried what seems like everything. I'm using garageband, my prs se 245, distortion pedal, and yamaha keyboard. Can anybody give me any info on how to make this sound...Better? It's so frustrating. Also, opinions and advice on the actual song, structure of the song, and lyrics that I've written would be incredibly helpful. Any comments are appreciated, Thanks. (No vocals yet)
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Lyrics
(Chorus)
What you see
You can't believe
Blank pages
Don't tell the story
Rain falling
The truth floods through
You should know
It was never you

(Bridge)
Watching from above
Looking on with love
I know you I
Know you're beautiful
Be all that you dreamed
Unreal it may seem
What can stop you
Let the truth shine through

(End)
This love I have for you
You're so unbelievable
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Uploaded: Oct 08, 2012 - 10:40:00 AM
Last Updated: Oct 08, 2012 - 10:40:00 AM Last Played: Aug 21, 2017 - 08:33:07 AM
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Songwriterz said 2171 days ago (October 9th, 2012)
Very good!
This is actually not as bad as you put it ;) Think it sounds really great and has great potential. What you've done so far with it is great. What you could do is to adjust a little bit.. fx. remove some brightness from the song in the mix and give it more punch with compressors. You need a little dynamics in the overall production fx you could remove some synth/strings to make more room for the dynamic instruments.. :) Feel free to write me a msg if you want - love Heidi
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LukeJL said 2169 days ago (October 10th, 2012)
Thanks
For the comment, I will keep what you said in mind when I work on this again! :)
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
alackbass said 2167 days ago (October 12th, 2012)
Rain Falling
Sounds pretty darn pro to me! The guitar tones rule! Great riffs!
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LukeJL said 2166 days ago (October 13th, 2012)
Thanks!
Thanks For the support!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
Vic Holman said 2167 days ago (October 12th, 2012)
rain falling
well, to me it sounds pretty good. maybe bring up the bass a little.

i guess the biggest wall that one can run into is trying to sound like someone else. just relax and be yourself. when it comes to mixing it's all trail and error and takes some time, eventually you get to where you want the mix to be
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LukeJL said 2166 days ago (October 13th, 2012)
Cool
I'll make the bass a little louder. Thanks for the comment!
Check out my latest song called Rain Falling (Finished)
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