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Eyes Wide Rosa Mae


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This is a song written for my daughter Rosa Mae Moody, who is 5 months old. It's basically telling her to be wary of religious indoctrination. I'd really value your opinions, in particular on the vocals i.e.

1. The delay on the main vocal
2. The effect on the vocals of the second verse.
3. The way it comes out of that effect.
4. and most of all - where I'm flat, or slip off vocally. where the slip ups are and how bad they are. I am genuinely struggling to tell whether I'm being to hard on myself or not and would be eternally grateful of honest and frank comments on this, so that I know what to take another stab at. I should say this is the first, very rough mix, and the first go at the vocal.

Thanks in advance chaps, is appreciated.
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Rosa darling Rosa Mae
I need to tell you about their games
Cos sad as it is they'll try to win you over
And put the guilt onto your shoulders

Keep you eyes wide Rosa Mae (repeat)

Rosa darling Rosa Mae
Beware of tall tall tales
Cos if there's a God why would he give you a mind
Just to ask you to ignore what it finds.
Keep your eyes wide Rosa Mae

Rosa darling Rosa Mae
Keep an eye out and one eye on truth
And believe me when I say
That you can bet they got their eye on you
When you're low
That's when they'll show
You the way
But the price you pay
Is a lifelong stain
And girl ya don't need saving

Rosa darling Rosa Mae
I need to tell you about their games
Cos sad as it is they'll try to win you over
And but the guilt onto your shoulders
Keep your eyes wide Rosa Mae.
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Uploaded: Oct 24, 2012 - 03:21:05 PM
Last Updated: Oct 24, 2012 - 03:21:05 PM Last Played: Nov 13, 2018 - 02:00:10 PM
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Name: Alex Moody
Location: Caerphilly South Wales United Kingdom
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I'm a singer/songwriter from the South Wales valleys and have been writing songs of one sort or another since my teens. I started off listening to nothing but hip hop, until a friend introduced me to the Kinks. Since then I've spent most of the last ... [see more]

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