Love Shack

Warren Smith

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The all-important first line came easily. It was the second line that proved difficult. Thirty possibilities were tried out. Finally, all of those possibilities became the song.

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LOVE SHACK [Buckley Smith]

Take me to your love shack
Hit me like a blackjack
Blow me like a smokestack
Flip me like a flapjack
Treat me like a bootblack
Eat me like a health snack
Stretch me on your torture rack
Pull me until I go slack

Shock me like a shark attack
Stalk me like a maniac
Enthrall me like a brainiac
Amuse me with a wisecrack
Enthuse me like a laugh track
Toss me like a gunny sack
Fill me up with what I lack
Kiss me like you're never coming back

Stuff me like a backpack
Floss me like a dental crack
Sauce me like a Big Mac
Tongue me like a Tic-tac
Adorn me with bric-a-brac
Talk to me with your yackety-yack
Shoehorn me with your clickety-clack
Inject me like a seismic frack

Slash me with a machete hack
Bash me with baseball whack
Abuse me with a thumbtack
Scare me like a heart attack
Tie me to the train track
Arrange me like a line of smack
Take me to your love shack
Kiss me like you're never going back

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Hits: 3590
Comments: 43
Fans: 20
Plays: 166
Downloads: 43
Votes: 0
Uploaded: Mar 02, 2013 - 03:20:50 PM
Last Updated: Mar 02, 2013 - 03:20:50 PM Last Played: Aug 19, 2018 - 09:51:52 AM

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Alannah	Alannah said 2033 days ago (March 3rd, 2013)
	I thought ..... ... I was gonna hear a cover of the B'52's ..... this was a delicious dose of Saturday Night Porn .... sweet ..... and free ... no brown wrappers were harmed .... great lyrics ! Check out my latest song called Sleep (w JScott and Alannah)

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2031 days ago (March 4th, 2013)
	Brown wrapper songs Yes, kids, be careful what you wish for .. because the trip to a love shack can spin off in unexpected directions. Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

KCsGROOVE	KCsGROOVE said 2033 days ago (March 3rd, 2013)
	love shack those lyrics made me smile all the way :-) enjoyed! KC Check out my latest song called The stranger 2

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2031 days ago (March 4th, 2013)
	Lyrics The rhymes kept piling up .. until it became obvious that that was what was meant to be : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

alackbass	alackbass said 2033 days ago (March 3rd, 2013)
	Love Shack At first I listened without reading the lyrics. I wondered how long you could keep the rhyming scheme going. Surprise, surprise, all the way to the end. Cool backing track. I like the minor chord progression. The changes give it a cool surf music vibe. Check out my latest song called Mean Miss Teacher

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2031 days ago (March 4th, 2013)
	To read or not to read That is always a consideration - do you peruse the lyrics before listening .. or not. Since a song is meant to be heard .. probably not. But it is also meant to be a literary exercise .. so reading before listening also makes sense. I do it both ways .. but usually choose on a whim : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

richard13	richard13 said 2033 days ago (March 3rd, 2013)
	Big, big smile! Very clever lyrics: congrats on being able to keep it up (no pun intended ;-) and the music is gently perfect. Even the song art is both appropriate and humorous. Great post; thanks. I especially like the timeliness of "seismic frack". Check out my latest song called one last night with you

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2031 days ago (March 4th, 2013)
	Clever The odd thing about its cleverness is that it didn't start out to be the way it became. You know how this goes - you start out with an idea and somewhere along the path of its development it decides to head off in a different direction .. and suddenly it feels like you are just along for the ride : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

richard13	richard13 said 2031 days ago (March 4th, 2013)
	I know EXACTLY what you mean I've had it happen too many times to count. Check out my latest song called one last night with you

Vic Holman	Vic Holman said 2032 days ago (March 3rd, 2013)
	who knew... that where so many - "ack" words :-) cool tune. lyrics are fun and some great guitar riffs going on Check out my latest song called Feeding The Sharks

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2031 days ago (March 4th, 2013)
	ack attack Vic, I didn't know how many, either, until they started to pile up. The next thing you know there wasn't room for anything else : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

DWL	DWL said 2032 days ago (March 4th, 2013)
	Brilliant! You have a real knack for this sort of thing. They ought to put your name on a plaque. Great stuff Warren! Cheers Dick Check out my latest song called Holy Ghost

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2031 days ago (March 4th, 2013)
	Knack for ack Knack .. hmm .. that "ack" rhyme didn't make it into the mix. The problem with getting your name on a plaque is then you have to find someplace to put it : ) Hmm .. plaque .. another rhyme that didn't make it. Dick, you obviously have a knack for the ack, too! Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

magnatone	magnatone said 2030 days ago (March 5th, 2013)
	Love Shack what hilariously great lyrics - very fun listen and terrific song! Check out my latest song called Hallelujah (Leonard Cohen) and Variations

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2030 days ago (March 5th, 2013)
	O.D. Karen - I'm glad you could see the humor in the overdose of rhymes : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

Philip18	Philip18 said 2030 days ago (March 5th, 2013)
	Love shack Very funny! Not sure what's going on in the picture, but I guess that's the love shack? The music rolls along nicely with the lyrics. Continually engaging. Good one, Warren! Check out my latest song called Refuge

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2029 days ago (March 6th, 2013)
	Love Shack engagement Continuous engagement - that's what I want from making music! Thanks for coming by for a laugh : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

Moviz	Moviz said 2030 days ago (March 5th, 2013)
	I love the tongue in cheek lyrics and expression in your voice as you sing them.... I was expecting a version of the B52's 'Love Shack', which I loved, but this is just as entertaining. I know what you mean about lyrical possibilities becoming the song too... it's sometimes the way my lyrics work out LOL.... really enjoyed this, Regards M Check out my latest song called We'll Meet Again

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Warren Smith said 2029 days ago (March 6th, 2013)

LOL
The title shared with the B52s was purely coincidence; there was never any thought of trying to tap into their distinctive aura. In fact, I guess I unconsciously ignored that song, because there wasn't any intent to imitate. Whatever themes I hoped to explore simply disappeared in the deluge of rhyming lines. As you note .. it became an LOL moment.

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sewer rod	sewer rod said 2029 days ago (March 6th, 2013)
	Love Shack I admit, I thought I was going to hear a cover song but was glad to hear what I did. Surfer-porn kind of feel. Very fun for me to listen to. I especially enjoy the line "blow me like a smokestack" Very good job on the rhyming scheme! Thanks for posting Check out my latest song called No Superhero

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2029 days ago (March 6th, 2013)
	Beginning and ending Beyond the pile-up of end rhymes .. the other literary challenge was the developing the front end verbs .. which also started to rhyme. It's crazy how something simple can get rather complex when writing a song. Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

paul f. page	paul f. page said 2029 days ago (March 6th, 2013)
	Definitely NOT whacked. Clever. Kind of a quasi-melodic rap with some very down-home accompaniment and an easy rhythm and harmony to hold it all together. Must have been fun finding all those rhyming lines. I enjoyed the listen. Check out my latest song called Caprice

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2027 days ago (March 8th, 2013)
	Visiting Thanks for coming by, Paul. At the same time, I've been listening to your latest posts .. and will leave a comment soon. Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

PeterB7858	PeterB7858 said 2029 days ago (March 7th, 2013)
	Love Shack Interesting way to write a song, Warren. I like it! The eastern flavoured guitar work sets the tone and the rhyming lines are a hoot. Your layered vocals sound spot on. Enjoyed. Thanks, Peter. Check out my latest song called The Parting Of The Ways

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2027 days ago (March 8th, 2013)
	Sing-along I can't get anybody else around here to sing with me .. so I have to accompany myself : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

apb	apb said 2027 days ago (March 8th, 2013)
	Well.. stimulate me with ammoniac..not here to give any flak.. that was fun! Enjoyed! :) Check out my latest song called Stowaway

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2027 days ago (March 8th, 2013)
	Rhymes Now I know who to turn to if I decide to add another verse! Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

gadzooks	gadzooks said 2026 days ago (March 10th, 2013)
	Love Shack Has that eastern surf feel ... great melody ... dig the guitars, tremelo works great .... and your doubled vocal sounds good. Great words! Cheers SG Check out my latest song called Emoji

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 2025 days ago (March 11th, 2013)
	Surfing the Atlantic Way Ha-ha .. when you say "eastern surf" I assume you are referring to the East Coast of the Northern Hemisphere .. from Nova Scotia on down here to, say, Long Island : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

lengold	lengold said 1995 days ago (April 9th, 2013)
	Great fun - enjoyed. Cheers Len Check out my latest song called Decent Girl

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 1995 days ago (April 10th, 2013)
	The fun is in the making I had fun making it : ) Thanks for the visit. Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

bud	bud said 1994 days ago (April 10th, 2013)
	Briliant solution to your dilemma love this song. your playing sounds great here - kind of spaghetti western - latin surf Check out my latest song called mixer 2

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 1983 days ago (April 21st, 2013)
	That works The logic of the storyline became as twisted as spaghetti : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

FEEL	FEEL said 1988 days ago (April 16th, 2013)
	Blushing But well done... You really got your message across and that's what counts most. I could see the Stones doing a version of this. Fine job on the lyrics, fitting drum track and kudos on the guitar work. Check out my latest song called A Second Life with Scott Carmicheal

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 1983 days ago (April 21st, 2013)
	Kudos Thanks for visiting and commenting. Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

Bob Rodgers	Bob Rodgers said 1969 days ago (May 5th, 2013)
	I love the lyrics, very inventive and a clever piece of writing. Great music too with nice guitar work, I like the eastern feel and tremolo sound on the guitar. Very much enjoyed Warren. Bob Check out my latest song called The Lonely Man

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 1932 days ago (June 11th, 2013)
	Influences Eastern feel? Must have listened to too much sitar music back in the 60s. As for tremolo - that got inculcated from too much Venturers .. even earlier : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

Stun Nutz	Stun Nutz said 1949 days ago (May 25th, 2013)
	shaking head in disbelief ...chuckling all the while. Fun tune. Check out my latest song called stagnation

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 1932 days ago (June 11th, 2013)
	Cool! If you chuckled all the while .. then you made it all the way to the end : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

composerclark	composerclark said 1930 days ago (June 14th, 2013)
	Play me like a Man-Pac … or Squeeze me like a Tetra Pak… no end to the possibilities for the lyrics in this song! Love the lyrics and rhyme scheme! Consider posting a Love Shack FAQ… (sorry; once I get started it's hard to stop). It sounds like you had a lot of fun with this, and I like it! Check out my latest song called A Little Song About Our Mom

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 1928 days ago (June 15th, 2013)
	Stack of possibilities That's the spirit! I'm going to collect together all new suggestions for rhymes to add another verse : ) Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

TheRye	TheRye said 1589 days ago (May 20th, 2014)
	love it! nice one! Check out my latest song called the dutch girl

Warren Smith	Warren Smith said 1588 days ago (May 21st, 2014)
	Thanks It was nice of you to stop by and leave a comment. Check out my latest song called Poor Richard

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Name: Warren Smith
Location: Brooklyn NY USA

Born in a Minnesota blizzard, I'm now residing in a coastal heat of Brooklyn, New York City. I recorded my first original composition as a teenager using a reel-to-reel tape recorder back in 1967, and I'm still finding it a creative challenge... [see more]

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