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wrote this song earlier today. Recorded it quickly. It doesnt feel finished yet - and it needs to be mixed better.
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i want you to know im not gone
i want you to feel you belong
you'l tire of the things you desire
to own
sometimes its better not to have known

when you love
try not to hate as much

we leave this earth all alone
with nothing but skin and bone
you've got to be cruel to be kind,
and strive for peace of mind...

When you love
try not to hate as much
when you love
ill watch from above
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Uploaded: Apr 03, 2005 - 10:35:37 PM
Last Updated: Apr 03, 2005 - 06:47:50 PM Last Played: Jun 02, 2019 - 10:30:58 AM
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cjorgensen said 5220 days ago (April 4th, 2005)
Way Cool
This is a great track, especially if you just knocked it out.

You should get a female vocalization behind this track.

"And the multicultural girls go, 'Do Do Do Do,"
The Simpsons.

Don't make it into a duet or anything, but if you have
some low level wordless harmonies (this the right term?)
in there, I think this piece would rule!
Check out my latest song called Gardens
cjorgensen said 5220 days ago (April 4th, 2005)
Minor Quible
A couple times either your breath hits the mic or the
levels peak. A $20 pop screen will take care of the first,
dropping the levels the second. Still like it a lot. Listened
enough to catch this third or fourth time through, so not
that big.
Check out my latest song called Gardens
aclarke said 5219 days ago (April 4th, 2005)
Liking it!
Cool stuff. I think what you have here is worth taking the
time to do it right. Mess with the mix... record the vocs
using a popscreen... do it up. Obbster- this song is pretty
good as it is but you have the capabilities to take this to
the next level! GO FOR IT!
Check out my latest song called Right on Time 2014- feat. David McNair
Silverspoon said 5218 days ago (April 5th, 2005)
Hello Computer
Do I hear some Radiohead influence?
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